Adaption Plan- Isabel Hambric

After receiving comments from peer reviewers I have decided to make a few changes. The most apparent change is that I need to rewrite and refocus my thesis. My peer reviewers had pointed out my thesis needs to be more specific, which I plan to connect my reasons for adaptions to the audience earlier now. An interesting point one of my reviewers brought up was that I need to have some more really specific details, which I agree with because some of my examples would be pretty apparent to fans of the book and series. A change no one brought up but I feel like I need is to better explain how much 10 years can change an audience. I would like to bring up how much more common nudity, drugs, sex, and cursing is in comparison to television ten years ago. All the feedback I got felt valuable so I plan on taking all the critique I got.