Action Plan: Acadia Bravo

Based on the feedback received from Osciel and Samantha, I figured out that I should focus on adding more examples and make it clearer exactly which version of the adaptations I am talking about. They both helped me figure out what my theme should be so I will work toward molding my paper with the audience variation in mind. The feedback I am definitely taking is focusing more on the difference in audience as well as clarifying and expounding upon examples/ where they are from. I am a little unsure about the more opinionated feedback such as the feeling of sentences being too long but other than that I am very appreciative of the feedback I received and I am planning to use almost all of it for my final draft.