Monday, July 2, 2018

Action Plan

Before my next and final draft of my essay I will fix the details in my paper especially references towards the older version of the movie. Nathan and Nick's peer reviews for my paper were helpful in showing me how to improve my paper and what I should keep because it was good. At first I did not know how to word some of my situations but the peer review helped with a second opinion on that. Also, after reading the other two paper's, I realized what other details I may want to include and how to explain more about the genre conventions and adaptations. I will need to elaborate more on details and use more examples involving the older movie. The peer reviews helped a lot and I needed to read others' papers to see where I was wrong or right. I enjoyed the reviews and will definitely use their tips to make my paper better.

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