Action Plan - Morgan Sousa

      Based on the feedback I received from the peer review I plan on making my paper more detailed. I have my ideas and the direction I plan on taking my paper set, but I need to elaborate more. I also need to connect my ideas back to my thesis instead of just pointing out the differences between the works. I plan on adding more solid examples to support the similarities and differences I have. Another thing I need to do is rework my introduction so it is more captivating for the reader. I will definitely be using the feedback I received, such as using more analysis and bringing the whole paper together with my so what. All my feedback was very helpful and I understand what I need to do in order to make my paper better.