Dawson Suncine - Action Plan

In order to make my paper better based off of the feedback I need to use different transitions and make my paper a bit more detailed. I have all good points according to my peer reviewers but in order to get a better grade I need better organization. The feedback I received was very helpful and I am very glad they were detailed in my grading. This peer editing was awesome for my writing skills and my grade will be much better for the final draft.