Action Plan
Based on the feedback I got from peer review I plan on using more specific examples with direct quotes from the movie. In the paragraphs I needed to use the movie as a direct source and take out quotes to help better explain my example. I plan on taking the feedback of being more specific especially in my introduction. In my introduction I am going to use more opening sentences based around the time period change of the movies. I plan on using all of the feedback to help better my paper. The only feedback I am unsure about is adding"beef" to my paper. I am unsure if they meant more examples, connections, or what. Most of the feedback I got was very clear and helpful. When I went back into my paper I could understand what they meant when they made the criticism.
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