action plan

After reading the peer review don on my essay show that i have a good starting place but dont have as much  detail as the reader would like. I can see that my essay is esentially a long intro because i only attack details that are the same type of change. As my reader says, i shoul focs on more examples that stem from different places rather than trying to focus on the 3 easy examples. whan i write my first draft i will make sure to approach the adaptaion in more ways than just the low hanging fruit of main character diferences. when i write my final draft i plan on touching more on the differences in tone, genre, and delivery of relevent information rather than just a simple difference in characters.