I plan on making a lot of changes to my next draft, however,
based on the feedback I received I hope to be more elaborate. I need to show
the major differences between the adaptations. By adding a few more examples, I
can really get the point across as to how different the two are. I also need to
loosen my introduction in order to get into the main point of the essay, which
is the analysis. I didn't find any feedback that I was unsure about, I found it
informative, with healthy amounts of critique and praise.
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