Danielle OBrien - Action Plan

For my final draft, I plan on going into more detail with my examples so that the point I'm trying to get across makes more sense. Both of the reviews done by my peers mentioned that my examples were a bit vague so I will be taking that feedback for when I rewrite it. I plan on keeping my main topic and points because my peers both said they liked the comparisons I did. I agree with both of their suggestions and their isn't any feedback that I am unsure about. I also plan on going through and making sure all my grammar and spelling is correct because that wasn't one of my main focuses with the draft.