Research Changes

     What I did to change my research paper was the structure of the argument. At first I only labelled the category as "argument" instead of creating subcategories of the different topics of my argument which was detrimental to the the paper. Now, I labelled the different topics such as "flow", "coping" and "growth vs. fixed mindset". I also changed the way I cited my sources because in my rough draft I incorrectly cited some of them. These changes will help polish my paper to create a better argument.