Action Plan - Samantha Held

     For my final draft, I plan on adding more of my voice in my writing. My rough draft included many of the authors opinions from my sources, so I will make sure that my voice is able to be heard. Also, I need to fix some of my citations for my final draft. This will be done by adding the volume and issue number of my sources. My peers told me to add other opinions in my argument other than those of teachers. I will do this by seeing what others think of my research question.