Project 2 Action Plan

       After meeting about my first draft, I realized that I needed to reorganize my arguments. Our meeting helped see what direction I wanted to go in with my essay. Before the meeting I had two arguments in my first draft and then after the meeting I had four solid arguments. I went back and did some more research that helped support my thesis and answer my research question. Another change I made was I made my introduction longer. In my rough draft my introduction got straight to the point. I thought it was better that it was shorter. However, I realized that I needed to make my introduction broader and longer so my reader could understand my topic a little before I began my argument. My four well put together arguments helped me to easily put together my conclusion and "so what" which tied my whole paper together. All of these critiques helped me create a well organized research essay.