Action Plan

After reading my peer reviews, I structured my essay so that each paragraph had a specific point and theme to it. I made my essay flow and easy to read/understand. I also explained what holistic medicine was and added why it is better than conventional medicine, instead of acting like the readers knew about it already. I went back and added more of my own words instead of using all quotes. towards the end of my work, it was fewer quotes and more explanation. I also made my lit review more clear and concise.