Action Plan

For the final draft, I plan on adding more quotes into my discussion section and strengthening the all arguments.  Since my rough draft did not have a literature review section, I plan on adding that and putting mostly factual knowledge and statistics into it.  For the conclusion I will add more onto the other possibilities of travel and breaks from school that are alternatives to a gap year.  Additionally, I plan to proof read my paper another two times before I turn it in to ensure there are no grammatical errors in the final draft.