Action Plan

For my final draft, I will do a final run-down and fix any small errors. My peers recommended me to add a comparison between two of my main subjects, which I have added. I have also taken into account the fact that I should not use words like "I" "me" or "our". I fixed the situation of my argument, that way my essay flows more easily. I have also added a lit review explaining some confusing components of my essay as well as included details for the reader to follow throughout the essay.